Why Should American Veterans Be Honored?

  • Well i have a 300-400 word essay im not really asking for answers but this is what i have so FAR

    We should honor American Veterans Because without them we would not have all the wonderful things that we now have. If we did not have these great warriors defending this great country we might have still been under the control of great Britain. These soldiers, Sailors, Air Men, Marines, and Coast Guards have been ready to stand in the way and stare into the eyes of the enemy ready to kill, or be killed and keep this country free. They made the Noble and brave sacrifices of leaving there family, friends, and life behind just to make sure no damage comes here. Only God knows The Teardrops and Blood shed for All who gave some, and some who gave all. For all the soldiers that missed there first childâ ™s years just so yours could sleep safe at night. They have defended the Constitution of the United States against all enemies, Foreign and Domestic for over 235 years. More importantly they defend the people that honor their service, that look upon them for security, and for a steady hand in time of crisis. They have taken a risk, expecting no glory, no fame, or even a thank you. They go over seas, and overland, some knowing that they might not even return home, protecting our right, laws, and freedom.

    Does it need anything does it sound good =] Wouldd Lovee THe Helpp THanxx =] <33


  • Check out some quotes by Churchill, Winston, you might find some good stuff to quote or plagerize..

    http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/So_much_owe...

    btw, I dont suggest stealing.. his stuff can be pretty recognizable.


  • It desperately needs a spell check, grammar check, and Caps check. But otherwise it's a nice essay. And pretty accurate, at least in my opinion.

    You don't say how old you are. This is nice for a middle-schooler, but you'll need A LOT more if you're in college.


  • You did a great job. We appreciate anyone who is on our side. Just the simple fact you see us as heroes and see the goodness we do is great. Especially at your age. Thank you!


  • I have some severe problems with your text.

    The idea that without the war in Iraq we would not have the Apple iPhone, is ludicrous. You need to be more specific in your claims.

    Backtracking to the war of independence is silly, our entire army was militia, fighting not for freedom from the british crown, but for material wealth, religious ideals, gold, and silver.

    The implication that Britain even today is evil and bad, is stupid and offensive.

    God has no place in a school paper that doesn't involve religion.

    Nobody has threatened the American constitution for over 200 years, save for the Republican party, which continue to violate it whenever it suits them. For instance Guantanamo, patriot act, FCC powers, activist supreme court judges.

    The idea that we went overseas to protect our own country is also largely nonsense. We went to Afghanistan, for example, for revenge. We went to Iraq, for our own geo-strategic interests.

    Do not blindly honor what you do not understand.


  • It's good but it needs proofreading


  • I think its really good. It brought tears to my eyes. Thank you.


  • This question is on this site EVERYDAY. I am so tired of seeing it.

    THIS IS FOR AN ESSAY CONTEST. Whatever happened to integrity. When I did essay contests I didnt ask the whole world for help.


    Good job though :)


  • Anony Mouse - You're an idiot.


  • That is really good for your age


  • Thank you.







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